Glory Winzer Poet Pantoum

Stormy

The sky is weeping, pouring down
The foggy air is heavy and damp
Sunlight is drowning in thick dark clouds
The earth shakes with thunder and storm

The foggy air is heavy and damp
Gray pre-dawn is deep and silent
The earth shakes with thunder and storm
Buried within the heavens mourning,

Gray pre-dawn is deep and silent
Sunlight is drowning in thick dark clouds
Buried within the heavens mourning
The sky is weeping, pouring down

©Copyright 2015. All rights reserved.

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Terry O'Leary November 3, 2015 at 12:41 PM Congratulations on your win on this fine pantoum!!

Skat A November 2, 2015 at 11:46 AM Glory, awesome win. SKAT

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores November 2, 2015 at 9:55 AM Congratulations in your win.

Jan Allison April 9, 2015 at 11:35 AM beautifully penned I love the impact of the repeated lines:-) Hugs jan xx Jan Allison April 9, 2015 at 2:53 PM I really need to give it a try:-) Hugs Jan xx