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Storms

In the fascinating life journey of a couple When clouds darken in their midst all of a sudden With murky grey shades in their relation purple Many a storms begin to twirl their souls ‘n burden. Clouds of hatred billow inside them both, Nights are full of creaking noises ‘n uproar Howling winds spread in hearts taunt ‘n loath Respect is tarred ‘n no rapport is attempted to fore. Startled winds of ego and jealousy begin to roll Through enraged corners of mind and heart Gales of dominance drive faster uncontrol Thunder of anger spooks their animal spirits apart. When their egos remain unbent and both do not yield They tear each other unresent and blow off their tops Relations start to break and love gets cartwheeled Pitted against the perpetuating gale of hatred it pops. Bolts of lightning rip their worlds poles apart Even gods seem furious and trigger the landslides Reverberating with ire, the unsettled hearts begin to smart Drowned in their desperation they lie low in their glides. After the brutal dazzle, a torrent of tears beat down their cheeks Drowning their muddied worlds in sorrow and gloom Flooded, they somehow lose energy to add more obliques Storm when it weakens later, it gives them some legroom. After clouds poured empty, they let open up the sky To both it dawns it would be silly to ignore nature’s reprieve They pull up themselves and decide to make another try With whatever bits and pieces left after the storm to retrieve It is easier to get over nature’s storms of wind and rain But difficult to revive sunshine of relations once sullied Not easy to repair vivid scars of the stormed souls that remain Hope and renewed love of twain may get differences buried. Date: 1/7/2014 Contest: Storms by Shadow Hamilton

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Date: 7/7/2014 1:03:00 PM
Congrats on a great win, Mohan my friend!.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/12/2014 10:08:00 AM
Arlene, thanks once again.
Date: 7/3/2014 11:58:00 AM
Amazing write Mohan ! Well deserved merited win ! Huge congrats !
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/12/2014 10:09:00 AM
Upma, thanks again.
Date: 7/2/2014 9:29:00 AM
Well done! Congratulations!
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/3/2014 2:45:00 AM
Roy, Thanks for your continued and valuable support. Mohan
Date: 7/2/2014 8:39:00 AM
Way to go, I think you have captured the storm and a winning spot. So glad you entered in time. Congratulations.
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/3/2014 2:47:00 AM
Thanx Richard for your warm complements. Mohan
Date: 7/2/2014 5:13:00 AM
This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/3/2014 2:48:00 AM
Sara, nice to hear from you as always. Mohan
Date: 7/1/2014 8:41:00 PM
Hey there, great to see you on the winners list! well done!
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/1/2014 8:43:00 PM
Good Morning and thanks Casarah. I managed to squeeze in the contest only just before it closed. Mohan
Date: 7/1/2014 7:55:00 PM
Hi Mohan, my friend, congratulations on a wonderful write and great win! You are so deserving. Warmest regards.
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/1/2014 8:51:00 PM
Good Morning and thanks Pandita. I managed to squeeze in the contest only just before it closed. Mohan
Date: 7/1/2014 6:55:00 PM
You did a really good job here, Mohan. Big congrats for your well deserved win.
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/1/2014 9:34:00 PM
Good Morning and thanks Andrea. I managed to squeeze in the contest only just before it closed. Mohan
Date: 7/1/2014 6:19:00 PM
good theme Mohan congrats on 4th place hugs
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/1/2014 8:40:00 PM
Thankyou Shadow again for your big support. Could enter your contest in the last minute as was wanting to take different take on the theme. Mohan

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