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Blustering winds blow spring is around the corner tornado season

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/2/2024 3:38:00 AM

It seems like now there are only a few months that don't have tornadoes anymore. Some years are worse than others but this past year it seemed like they were really bad. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 12/30/2023 12:43:00 PM

Lovely write enjoyed reading your poem

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 1/2/2024 7:38:00 PM

Thanks Yolanda.

Yann Rolland

Date: 12/22/2023 5:56:00 PM

wonderful piece, there is always hope at the corner merry christmas Jerry

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/19/2023 2:57:00 PM

oh no, tornadoes already. Seen many in my life time, only one that was destructive chewing its way through downtown Dallas and then our suburb (Garland)--think this was about 1957. Can still see those images. have a wonderful evening, Sara

Tom Woody

Date: 12/19/2023 2:45:00 PM

Ha! Not in NE Ohio. 4 more months

Silent One

Date: 12/19/2023 11:16:00 AM

Your haiku delicately paints the changing seasons, where the blustering winds signal the imminent arrival of spring. The imagery is vivid, and the anticipation of warmer weather is how we all feel... The unexpected twist in the last line, mentioning tornado season, adds a layer of tension and complexity to how fear creeps in with such elements.. nice one Jerry.