Kim Rodrigues Poet Personification

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A little humor.

Storming Over Lover's Lane

STORMING OVER LOVER’S LANE

lightning, streaked bare-naked, across the nighttime sky.
free form
full on
freedom
a roar of thunder-adulation along the lune’s running path.
hearty
pounding
handstorm
the stars blushed, twinkling out whistling tunes.
woot woot
go on
woot woot
exposed in magnificent display of albino cheeks.
zigzag 
zoom
muscleman
the lampooning lamppost likewise exposes cherub kisses.
far below
locked
in cars
tears of laughter rain down on lover’s lane, uplifting life on earth.

9/5/2017
light poetry

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Harry Horsman September 6, 2017 at 3:45 PM Well Kim i've witness many storms in my time, but never one like this,,,the fact you bring it alive, with deep rich imagination, truly speaks wonders of you and your poetry. Kim Rodrigues September 6, 2017 at 4:38 PM Thank you, Harry!

Vijay Pandit September 6, 2017 at 5:29 AM Lovely presentation--a fun journey through lover's lane! Kim Rodrigues September 6, 2017 at 7:01 AM Thanks, Vijay :)