Storming Over Lover's Lane

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STORMING OVER LOVER’S LANE lightning, streaked bare-naked, across the nighttime sky. free form full on freedom a roar of thunder-adulation along the lune’s running path. hearty pounding handstorm the stars blushed, twinkling out whistling tunes. woot woot go on woot woot exposed in magnificent display of albino cheeks. zigzag zoom muscleman the lampooning lamppost likewise exposes cherub kisses. far below locked in cars tears of laughter rain down on lover’s lane, uplifting life on earth. 9/5/2017 light poetry

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Harry Horsman

Date: 9/6/2017 3:45:00 PM

Well Kim i've witness many storms in my time, but never one like this,,,the fact you bring it alive, with deep rich imagination, truly speaks wonders of you and your poetry.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/6/2017 4:38:00 PM

Thank you, Harry!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/6/2017 5:29:00 AM

Lovely presentation--a fun journey through lover's lane!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/6/2017 7:01:00 AM

Thanks, Vijay :)