Written 28 October 2025 for Pentastitch it Poetry Contest of Nette Onclaud
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Storm Within Me Dusky clouds Gather within me, Blazing thunderbolts, Where weird worries spin and bounce Like storm gusts. All such clouds Will shortly dwindle, Wild winds will soon wane, New hopes and dreams will then bloom With new sun.
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