Storm Tossed Skies

across storm tossed skies
lightning strikes launched their gauntlets ~
thunder's voice bellowed

stormhaiku

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Nancy Kaufman

February 15, 2024 at 6:16 AM

Dear Lin, Wonderfully descriptive haiku. You captured the power of thunder in such a brief format. Happy Valentines day a touch belated Lin and thank you for your recent visit and comments as well.

Lin Lane

February 17, 2024 at 8:33 PM

Happy thoughts are never late, Nancy. Thank you for the read and fine comments.

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 15, 2024 at 2:43 AM

- Excellent haiku, Lin :) - hugs

Lin Lane

February 17, 2024 at 8:32 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise. hugs

Kim Rodrigues

February 14, 2024 at 3:19 PM

Ooh…I can feel it! Well done, Lin!

Lin Lane

February 17, 2024 at 8:32 PM

Thanks so much, Kim.

David Kavanagh

February 14, 2024 at 12:06 PM

A very descriptive haiku Lin, one can see and feel why our ancestors were so terrified of thunderstorms, and made offerings to the gods to try placate them, cheers David

Lin Lane

February 14, 2024 at 12:33 PM

I don’t fear thunderstorms, but then we can escape them. Our early ancestors could not. Thanks for liking this one, David.