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Storm Rage

in the mist of proposal rivers of recovered water. the master of them all existing Aquarians appeared, all went mixed. the muscles of this bolded river dilated, fear raged on the small hearted creatures, trafficking of disposals added heterogeneously, power of the enemies increased with regards to their smiles, dreams seemed to ride off the coats, waters flowed with no limited acceleration, wonders became the topic of the mind, nerves expanded and pain slides went on, voices boxes failed to hold that heavy load and all went out. all eyes where on the victim but none desired to assist. it was all in these river with breath of the daily life, a small river created together with its twin sister. why would they recognize it because it is bushed with loneliness, all it has its a dark shadow seen by no one, even its body turned to be visible to the blinded. how easy can it be for the good sighted to spot for they are too busy in the counters of their own self-makeup oh thou river hold on its a fact that every start has a stop point

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/19/2016 12:32:00 AM
keitumetse delician, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) - Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/18/2016 8:19:00 AM
Keitumetse, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/18/2016 2:56:00 AM
not easy but can be discussed
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