Storm Over the Glen

Through my living room window
I see the most beautiful glen
With granites of grey
Towering up to a Ben

Greened spreads of heather
Purples and white
Amidst an ocean of green
A most wonderful sight

Forested slopes
Carpet the glens sides
Whilst a sparkling river
Centers the great divide

I look to the skies
As they turn battleship grey
An impending storm
Is heading my way

It looks like the glen
Is in for one hell of a night
The last storm we had
Was an explosive delight

Fork lightening, thunder
Obscured by clouds
One follows the other
Arcing out loud

I await the winds
And the vertical rains
Lashing with force
Against my cottage panes

Suddenly, theres a massive roar
More powerful than i have heard before
A sheet of lightening lit up the sky
Capturing the Ben of granite high

This man of old, caught in silhouette
Standing guard over his beautiful glen
This icon, this keeper of the Saltire Blue
Stands tall and proud like Highland men

Hours pass as i look on in awe
From my cottage window through the rain laiden panes
The power of nature in many scenes
Drums and a light show washed down with champagne




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Date: 4/9/2010 9:57:00 AM
Another of your most picturesque pieces James. Leaves me yearning to come to Scotland and Ireland! Ahh maybe one day..so I can find all of my relations that are still there!! Thanks so much for painting this pic with words and for always taking the time to read my writes! Have a gloriously blessed day~Mary~
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Date: 4/8/2010 2:48:00 PM
I can picture that cottage...and all the scenery...very teasing James..indeed beautiful..Charma
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Date: 4/8/2010 2:17:00 PM
How I wish I could be there to see the beauty of your countryside, James. Awesome description. Another one for my favorites! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/8/2010 1:07:00 PM
Linda's stolen all my words on commenting for this truly wonderful poem! love Simone
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Date: 4/8/2010 1:02:00 PM
James I know no other poet with such descriptive qualities as u have when creating a poem.. I feel immersed in it as I read... soup mail in a few..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/8/2010 12:54:00 PM
beautiful, can see it in my minds eye, the only time I was ever in Scotland , it rained and stormed for the whole two weeks, well done
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