Storm Love Note / Trois Par Huit

Strong winds blew 
note from my hand to you
We both had bent down to pick it up

Upon rising your head hit my hot coffee cup
That was the beginning of my great good luck
I must admit in this anecdote

It was blank, no words wrote
Storm love note



entry for Jared Pickett's contest:  
Trois Par Huit
Placement: 3rd place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Gorelick Avatar
June 2, 2010 at 1:05 PM
I missed this the first time around..Terrific job. glad to share 3rd with you.. BG
Pickett Avatar
June 2, 2010 at 8:43 AM
I have enjoyed judging this contest and have given this poem a ticket to the winners circle.... Congrats my friend.... I hope to see you in my Rondel contest.....:JP]
Mehta Avatar
May 21, 2010 at 8:39 PM
Wish you good luck in the contest. Humor flows
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