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Storm Coming

dark gray clouds appear
thunder rumbles loudly --
time to walk away.

6/4/21

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/6/2021 5:10:00 AM

Good one. If there is thunder, it is time to get where it seems safe. I know of two people who were struck by lightning inside there home. I know that was a horrible things for them. Of course, I think you were actually writing about some event instead of actual thunderstorm. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara

Kim Merryman
Date: 6/9/2021 11:04:00 AM

Thank you, Sara! I don't like lightning. I live in Florida which is supposed to be the lightning capital of the world.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/5/2021 3:51:00 PM

You describe the onset of the storm perfectly and it is a good time to go indoors. Lovely haiku, Kim!

Kim Merryman
Date: 6/9/2021 11:03:00 AM

Thank you, Carolyn!

Rico Leffanta

Date: 6/5/2021 10:34:00 AM

Where?

Kim Merryman
Date: 6/9/2021 11:03:00 AM

NW Florida. The storm fizzled out. Thanks for stopping by!

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/5/2021 4:40:00 AM

Great Haiku. I can feel the storm at the doorstep! :)

Kim Merryman
Date: 6/9/2021 11:01:00 AM

Thank you, Heidi!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/4/2021 10:19:00 PM

I don't mind the rain so long as I am inside :)

Kim Merryman
Date: 6/9/2021 11:01:00 AM

I agree! Thank you, Victor!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/4/2021 6:11:00 PM

Unless it turns into a flood to carry us all away (sorry but I am so pessimistic these days!!). My mind just went straight to metaphor.

Kim Merryman
Date: 6/4/2021 6:54:00 PM

That's ok, Andrea. These days it is hard to be optimistic. Thank you for your ccomment!

Judy Ball

Date: 6/4/2021 5:44:00 PM

h I do love a good drenching rain. Sounds like a lovely night to me. Of course it can put damper on thee daytime though. A fine Haiku my friend. God Bless, JB

Kim Merryman
Date: 6/4/2021 6:52:00 PM

Thank you, Judy!

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