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Clouds rock up vengeful mouthing off - ranting, raging spitting bolts willy-nilly But tantrum passes, temper abates with mutters as clouds roll on by, in sky. Clouds rubbed, get charged up like people pricked and prodded build up static energy, till the threshold reached, out pops the lightning flashing, thunder banging and crashing.

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Date: 8/18/2017 2:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, John, I do like the imagery of your poem very powerful ~*
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Date: 8/16/2017 8:06:00 AM
Congratulations for your win John :)
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Date: 8/16/2017 12:21:00 PM
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