Melani Udaeta Poet Pantoum

Storm Clouds

I played your song all the way home, 
the sky looked down and bellowed;  
Two twin flames ripped apart, 
a perfect night ravaged by the clock;

The sky looked down and bellowed; 
Memories are rooted in divine timing; 
A perfect night ravaged by the clock, 
storm clouds exploded as we released; 

Memories are rooted in divine timing, 
two twin flames ripped apart; 
Storm clouds exploded as we released, 
I played your song all the way home.

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Mystic Rose Rose July 14, 2022 at 11:24 AM so much can be captured while listening to a song, nicely penned dear poet, :) Melani Udaeta July 14, 2022 at 3:44 PM Thank you very much.

Darlene De Beaulieu July 14, 2022 at 10:42 AM Hello Melani, I sense the romance in this poem. Filled with emotions. Hugs. Darlene De Beaulieu July 14, 2022 at 3:21 PM Hello Melarni, yes it is a special moment captured. Hugs. Melani Udaeta July 14, 2022 at 10:51 AM Indeed. A special moment I captured.