Storm At Sea

The temperate swoosh of grand sea in the bathtub half full.
   Sudden ripple of thunder and lightning in competitive swim.
Dissolution of soap and shampoo, bare naked towel.

7/31/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Faulkner Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 12:50 PM
Love 'grand sea in bathtub half full' must have been a mess!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 1:18 PM
LOL! Thanks! Lotsa inspiration with the grands visiting...less time to write.
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