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Storm Alert Haiku Number 23

Purple black skies hang Over mountainous sea's surge Coastguard hears Mayday

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Date: 1/2/2010 10:26:00 AM

Yes, brings to life the threat of storm. Great haiku. thanks for your comment on my poem. Andrea

Date: 12/23/2009 4:11:00 PM

Good use of imagery. The last line was a surprise which I liked. Keep up the good writing. Karen

Date: 11/24/2009 8:28:00 AM

Very impressive write. I hope everyone was alright. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara

Date: 11/20/2009 4:23:00 PM

sounds ominous, enjoyed reading!1

Date: 11/5/2009 4:13:00 PM

very vivid! Light & Love

Date: 10/31/2009 3:14:00 PM

WOW ... storm indeed ... love the purple black skies ... and the last line was really a surprise. Wonderful write here, Deirdre !!

Date: 10/8/2009 7:20:00 AM

Love l2 Deirdre.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Date: 10/7/2009 9:07:00 AM

Another S O S , Deirdre . Shame On Seán ....

Date: 10/7/2009 4:20:00 AM

Deirdre, this is indeed an amazing write. Thank you. Love, Carol

Date: 10/6/2009 11:54:00 PM

Nice work Deirdre.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today and for the update info about 'guth'

Date: 10/6/2009 5:06:00 PM

Good use of imagery to add suspence in this poem. Good ending. Keep on writing. Karen

Date: 10/6/2009 1:07:00 PM

I like this. Thanks....Marty

Date: 10/6/2009 11:28:00 AM

The first and middle line are excellent, nice work Deirdre...Raul