Storm

STORM Twilight displayed spectacular spectrum Me walking in garden: Usual norm Sunrays pasted colors on sky-album as daily evening-duty to perform. Torn clouds wished to wear rainbow-uniform. Startled, shuddered on sudden summer storm Gust in lust on thrust brought fragrance from past Reminiscence: Romantic aroma. Hidden memory ignited my thirst. Whiling wind in my mind caused enigma. Emerald emotion in dilemma, sinking in vortex of melodrama. Trees greeted blowing breeze, waving branches Passionate petals fell off on silent scream. Gale outburst tearing off flower-bunches. Ruthless wind winding my forgotten dream. Sudden storm seemed ferocious and grim, manifesting force and strength in supreme. Whom I had left still throbbing in my pulse. Tempest in heart pushed me on strong impulse. 01/29/18 Urban Sonnet Contest by LauraLoo

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Lu Loo

Date: 2/21/2018 9:51:00 AM

great poem sweet Anisha, loved the imagery! thank you and congrats :)-luloo

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/20/2018 10:10:00 AM

A wonderful read. Congrats on your win, Anisha.

Emile Pinet

Date: 1/29/2018 11:22:00 AM

Like a moth to a flame you seduce us with the passion of you words and we fall prey to their magic. Your heart took stage and treated the reader to a glimpse of your poetic soul. Wonderful work my friend, Emile.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/29/2018 1:26:00 AM

- A beautifully described poem, Anisha :) - Many wonderful lines ... "Passionate petals fell off on silent scream" .... gorgeous ! - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)