Premiere Contest WinnerStorm

Fiery shafts explode in light.
Thunder shakes the black of night.

Wailing winds shriek and cry
As storm begins to fill the sky.

Clouds in chaos twist and swirl
Release their sting of icy peril.

Sea churned white and sick with foam.
Gulls in fear, no longer roam.

Earth is purged of earthly pride.
Hell's mad fury, while Heaven cried.


 written 08.29.2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 6:40 PM
wow, this has a great ring to it. Just what Brian was looking for .Congrats on your great trophy win.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 3:39 PM
Wonderful!
Grasso Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 11:03 PM
Thank you, Kim! ...Fran
Chansarkar Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 9:54 AM
Hell's fury captured aptly!Congrats Francis!
Grasso Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 11:02 PM
Thank you, Sara! ...Fran
Medders Tobechi Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 12:32 PM
Congratulations!
Grasso Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 11:14 PM
Thank you, Janis! ...Fran
Krampe Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 12:04 PM
Congrats on your win, Francis. I can hear the wind, lots of wonderfully explosive consonants :) Agnes
Grasso Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 11:13 PM
Thank you, Agnes! ...Fran
Nusker Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 10:17 AM
Absolutely wonderful poem and very well deserved the top placement. Congratulations, Francis.
Grasso Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 11:12 PM
Thank you, AFZAL! ...Fran
Scars Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 10:02 AM
Francis, congrats on your well deserved top placement, love the couplets :)-luloo
Grasso Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 11:11 PM
Thank you, luloo! ...Fran
Allison Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 9:48 AM
such wonderful couplets Francis it reads so beautifully many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Grasso Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 11:10 PM
Thank You, Jan! ...Fran
Leiser Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 9:15 AM
Beautifully written and rolls off the tongue so smoothly! Congrats on your top win, Francis :)
Grasso Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 11:09 PM
Thank you, Laura! ...Fran
Canerdy Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 9:11 AM
Excellent, TOP-winning poem, Francis--deserving of a 7-PLUS! Janice
Grasso Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 11:09 PM
Thank you, Janice! ...Fran
Merryman Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 10:24 AM
An amazing, powerful write, Francis, filled with alternate meanings! Blessings!
Grasso Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 9:01 PM
Thank you, Kim.
Godwin Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 9:44 AM
What a punch this packs - loved that ... CayCay
Grasso Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 9:01 PM
Thanks, CayCay.
Jameson Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 8:41 AM
Very good - captures what the title says
Grasso Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 9:00 PM
Thank you, Martin.
Smith Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 8:37 AM
I see this happening sooner than we think. Loved the couplets Fran.
Grasso Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 9:00 PM
Thanks for reading, Tim.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 8:09 AM
Oh so well described..actually i'm living in stormy weather and its so cold grrrr...:) Sunita
Grasso Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 8:59 PM
Thank you Sunita.
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