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03/27/25

Thrust in the centre of the storm........

First Place 

Contest by Anoucheca Gangabiissoon

Twilight displayed spectacular spectrum Sun rays pasted colors on sky-album. Startled shuddered on sudden storm Gust in lust on thrust brought fragrance from past Long lost amour sending romantic aroma Hidden memory ignited my thirst. Whiling wind in my mind caused enigma. Strong breeze shaking boughs, waving branches Passionate petals fell off on silent scream. Gale outburst tearing off flower-bunches. Ruthless wind winding my dormant dream. Sinking in morbid melancholy, reminiscing my sweetheart, my honey, whom I had left at corner of my journey. The remembrances are rippling, still on my beats of pulse. hitting me on strong impulse, driving to despondency, me crippling. Emotive urges not to surge, rather stagnancy to indulge. Sudden summer storm outburst Heart of the storm shattered my heart. What is actually happening, hard to analyse. All my sensations going to be paralysed, Only feeling pricking : Without you I am to live for the rest of my life, how can I survive ?

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Date: 4/27/2025 7:21:00 AM
Sweet shattering of dreams Anisha. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 3/28/2025 5:12:00 AM
Oh!! Life goes on after an emotional storm and here's hoping that the storm helps a person learn a good lesson or maybe several good life lessons. I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
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