Notes About The Poem

Written, July 8, 2024
For The Contest, “Tank-A-Crostic Time Again”
Sponsor, Andrea Dietrich

STORM

Somber summer storm

Teases dark clouds with lightning

Orthodox at first-

Reforms with loud thunder booms

Morphing war midst armored skies
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Dietrich Avatar
July 29, 2024 at 3:19 PM
Clever imagery , Sandra. I am nitpicky and couldn't get over morphing not being followed by the word "into". Congrats. Your picture is really cool too.
Swan Avatar
July 9, 2024 at 4:08 AM
I like the armoured skies, and somber has the right sound, for me, for big sky poetry. J :)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 8, 2024 at 6:50 PM
Great imagery!
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