Storm

Storm Dethroned beggar of a borrowed callow mystery Heaves a lightning staff into the waves - Thunderous and raw clandestine secrecy On luminous swirling ariels sheering the celestial 12-2-20 Liberum Divisa 3 Sponsor: Gregory Barden Taken from The Tempest

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/6/2020 4:48:00 AM

Catches my attention right away. So interesting!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/11/2020 2:18:00 PM

Hi Kim! Shakespeare's Tempest seemed to bring this poem to the surface - so to speak. Glad you it caught your attention. That is a high compliment! Sending you blessings!

Mark Koplin

Date: 12/4/2020 7:57:00 AM

Such power and poise in these words! Awesome

Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/11/2020 2:16:00 PM

Sending you many thank you's Mark! So glad you liked "the Storm." Hoping your season is filled with with peace, serenity and joy!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/3/2020 1:34:00 PM

Spectacular words, Sam! You chose very well.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/11/2020 2:15:00 PM

Sending you a simple thank you my friend! The Tempest poem is a favorite and I was hoping to find an excerpt that would fit Greg's contest. So grateful for the affirmation!

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 12/2/2020 11:55:00 AM

A great choice for the contest with graceful imagery, Sam!!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/2/2020 1:19:00 PM

Thank you so much Newton! It took me a while to decide on the right excerpt. Your message is such an encouragement! So full of gratitude! Warm wishes!