Storm

Rippling energy pacing skys wrestling clouds spark and boom pushing thoughts around my head to clear the path for brighter days

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 12/21/2018 7:21:00 AM

This can be thought about at many levels. I'm told over and over than conflict is normal and part of our condition. I also imagine that physical storms and upsets have scared people for a million years. The ones in my head, however, are the most disturbing.

Paul Callus

Date: 6/23/2018 8:35:00 AM

A very lovely and meaningful poem. Laura. Storms have their good points; unfortunately most people see only the negative side! ~ Hope you are keeping well. Warm regards // paul

Laura Hay
Date: 2/11/2019 2:17:00 PM

Thank you Paul! A long time since i’ve written so will catch up with your work shortly, warm regards, Laura

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/2/2018 8:46:00 AM

It's necessary to clear the way...Have a brighter day...All the best Laura

Laura Hay
Date: 2/11/2019 2:12:00 PM

Thank you for stopping by to read this poem. All the best to you Arturo