Storm

Rippling energy
pacing skys
wrestling clouds
spark and boom
pushing thoughts
around my head
to clear the path
for brighter days

inspirationfree verse

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Duke Beaufort

December 21, 2018 at 7:21 AM

This can be thought about at many levels. I'm told over and over than conflict is normal and part of our condition. I also imagine that physical storms and upsets have scared people for a million years. The ones in my head, however, are the most disturbing.

Paul Callus

June 23, 2018 at 8:35 AM

A very lovely and meaningful poem. Laura. Storms have their good points; unfortunately most people see only the negative side! ~ Hope you are keeping well. Warm regards // paul

Laura Hay

February 11, 2019 at 2:17 PM

Thank you Paul! A long time since i’ve written so will catch up with your work shortly, warm regards, Laura