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Stop the Ride

It started off as fun, and 
games... Who knew fun could 
turn into terrifying in a matter 
of 
seconds  ?

I scream until my lungs are 
raw, and unbearably painful .

STOP ! Over, and over until I'm 
tired of hearing the sound of 
my own voice .

The world spins faster, and 
faster as the ride continues... I 
wan't off . I want it to be over . 
I'm dizzy , and weak .

My legs tremble with fear , my 
heart beats with adrenaline .

Just stop the ride . Stop the 
ride .

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Skat A

Date: 7/25/2016 1:04:00 AM

NICE TO SEE THIS ONE AGAIN, JAYDEN. SKAT

Skat A

Date: 6/12/2014 5:21:00 PM

Jayden, well done, i like the dizzy spell, you were under. Amazing write,...~SKAT~

Jayden Jackson
Date: 6/16/2014 10:37:00 PM

thank you SKAT ! :)

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 6/10/2014 9:51:00 AM

I can relate to this when I was younger riding rides at Astro World which no longer exist. Love how you captured the reader in the beginning to the end..Excellent write Jayden.

Jayden Jackson
Date: 6/10/2014 11:53:00 PM

Thank you ! I'm glad you can relate to my piece !