Stop the Ride

It started off as fun, and 
games... Who knew fun could 
turn into terrifying in a matter 
of 
seconds  ?

I scream until my lungs are 
raw, and unbearably painful .

STOP ! Over, and over until I'm 
tired of hearing the sound of 
my own voice .

The world spins faster, and 
faster as the ride continues... I 
wan't off . I want it to be over . 
I'm dizzy , and weak .

My legs tremble with fear , my 
heart beats with adrenaline .

Just stop the ride . Stop the 
ride .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 7/25/2016 1:04:00 AM
NICE TO SEE THIS ONE AGAIN, JAYDEN. SKAT
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Date: 6/12/2014 5:21:00 PM
Jayden, well done, i like the dizzy spell, you were under. Amazing write,...~SKAT~
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Jayden Jackson
Date: 6/16/2014 10:37:00 PM
thank you SKAT ! :)
Date: 6/10/2014 9:51:00 AM
I can relate to this when I was younger riding rides at Astro World which no longer exist. Love how you captured the reader in the beginning to the end..Excellent write Jayden.
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Jayden Jackson
Date: 6/10/2014 11:53:00 PM
Thank you ! I'm glad you can relate to my piece !
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