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S afely I confided in you T he emotional marks are still black and blue. O h woman can't you see what you're doing to me? P lease stop your cheating ways before I lose my sanity! T he days seem long and the nights even longer. H owever this emotional strain isn't making me much stronger. E verything I do to please you leaves a dirty taste - just a waste! H elplessly I'm at the end of my rope. U nfortpunately for me the end came in the form of an envelope. R eading her last words and superficial verbs I'll never forget. T he sun will set, I'll smoke my last cigarette and play Russian Roulette!

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Date: 8/25/2010 12:13:00 PM
Many congratulations on your win in Jared's fine contest Jimmy with this wonderful poetry >> James
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Date: 8/25/2010 10:04:00 AM
Congratulations Jimmy on your win in Jared Pickett's contest "Acrostic 2". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/25/2010 4:38:00 AM
nothing more wounding thatn love lost! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 8/24/2010 8:40:00 PM
What a powerful write! Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
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Date: 8/24/2010 11:29:00 AM
Congrats Poetic Warlock on your number one win in Jared's contest with this superb Acrostic poem and excellent content... enjoy your win as I enjoyed the read..with luv..
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Date: 8/24/2010 11:20:00 AM
wonderful poem, emotionally driven, congrats on your win
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Date: 8/24/2010 10:07:00 AM
Excellent poem, Jimmy. Congratulations on your first-place win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/24/2010 9:28:00 AM
I especially liked the end line!!!! I am not going to lie man if not for it you would have been #2, instead you took a three way #1 with Cecil Hinkman and Steven Godberry.... Don't get me wrong the poem as a whole was good but the ending made it spectacular..... Congratulations my friend on your well deserved win..... Look out for my Diamante coming next!!!!!...:JP]
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Date: 5/10/2010 12:58:00 PM
Oh, come on, JImmy, don't play Russian Roulette over some girl! sounds like she does not deserve it. (well, I take it this is just fiction?) An enjoyable read. LUv, andrea
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Date: 5/9/2010 12:32:00 PM
I really like this one. You chose the perfect words to express the hurt. Great write.
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Date: 5/3/2010 7:21:00 PM
Awesome job you did on this one Jimmy. Thanks also for your own comments that you leave on my writes. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/3/2010 4:56:00 PM
Fine acrostic. I enjoyed it
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Date: 5/3/2010 12:39:00 PM
Another good Acrostic, JAM!! I guess your "Lab" wa all sealed up as you wrote this piece! lol...Goes to my favs...Much love, always, PB
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Date: 5/3/2010 12:07:00 PM
"The end came in the form of an envelope"the end comes in many ways sometimes in life..yet Russian Roulette is a tough solution..and should never be a choice..painful and deep emotions here,,great write..Charma
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