Stop Playing With That!

Keep playing with that
   and you will go blind, young man!
      Every boys' nightmare...


Won 5th place in the "Redneck Psalms, Improve Human Foible" by John Freeman

A. Green
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Devonshire Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 12:48 PM
I was really glad to see this in the winners' circle, Amy. Sooo funny! Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 7:07 AM
Congratulations Amy on your win in John Freeman's contest "Redneck Psalms,Improve Human Foible". Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 6:04 AM
Congrats Awesome Amy on your winning poem (so cute to bring this one up) did I say up? in the Redneck Psalms contest with these wise words and awesome advice... we had lots of boys in our family so it made me think back and smile ..granny got after everyone..haha.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA..
Dietrich Avatar
July 2, 2010 at 11:53 PM
oh, boy, you sure picked a good one, Amy. Congratulations on your win! lUv, Andrea
Freeman Avatar
July 2, 2010 at 10:15 PM
My, My Amy, I never would have dreamed a female wrote that.Smile! Congratulations on taking a 5th place in my contest. Agape, Moses
Taylor Avatar
July 1, 2010 at 5:02 PM
Don't know for sure but if it were true there would be a lot more blind men around! LOL. Great write, Amy. xxxRalph
Trusty Avatar
July 1, 2010 at 10:00 AM
Amy, this really cracked me up, GOOD JOB. However, to all the guys out there, "Git a grip on yourself" because "Hindsight is always 20/20" and if Amy is only half right then "A one eyed man would still be king in the valley of the blind!" Just don't get involved in an AWAY game of pocket pool. Sorry Amy, please forgive an old sailor for the "Sea stories" lol. All the best JT
Mehta Avatar
June 30, 2010 at 7:31 PM
Hahahah. Wonderful humor. Good luck in the contest
Culverhouse Avatar
June 30, 2010 at 5:30 PM
funny
Mitchell Avatar
June 30, 2010 at 2:11 PM
lol! Funny!
Gorelick Avatar
June 30, 2010 at 11:57 AM
This is the funniest thing I have read in a long while. BG
Conway Avatar
June 30, 2010 at 10:31 AM
Oh My Gosh, that's hillarious!~Tirzah~
Devonshire Avatar
June 30, 2010 at 10:24 AM
Can't stop laughing, Amy. Very clever!! And truly an old "wives' tale." Love, Carolyn
Belt Avatar
June 30, 2010 at 9:49 AM
LOL Too Funny good luck in the contest.....Larry
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