Stone Washed

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A nostalgic glimpse of the 1970s...

Stone Washed
By Valerie D. Staton

stiff denim fabric
attacked by gang of pumice - 
heavily distressed

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/19/2018 7:57:00 AM

I enjoyed your Haiku. Remove the capital letters at the beginning of each line and you will be more true to the form.

Valerie Staton
Date: 10/29/2018 11:03:00 PM

My computer constantly changes the text capitalizing each line. Thanks for the input. Greatly appreciated.

Eric Boddie

Date: 2/10/2018 2:24:00 PM

distress comes and goes....and as everybody knows....comfort for my clothes....nice write valerie....;)

Valerie Staton
Date: 2/10/2018 2:40:00 PM

Thank you!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

Date: 2/6/2018 7:34:00 AM

Ha! Nice one! Love it :) smiles! xomo

Valerie Staton
Date: 2/6/2018 8:04:00 AM

Thanks Maureen! Praying all us well.

Arturo Michael

Date: 2/6/2018 5:55:00 AM

You made me smile... Very distressed it looks...Good imagery...All the best Valerie

Valerie Staton
Date: 2/6/2018 7:19:00 AM

Good Morning! Glad to be able to bring a smile to your face. Hopefully I will be able to bring more! Thank you and have a wonderful day!

Stone Washed

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