Stone In the Cold-3

I face the final test of nature's truth.
The nights coming fast, I travel unheard.
The reverence I feel, was born in my youth,
tempered by sage, burnt offerings for birds.
Tormented by brambles whose thorns I collect
I come to remains of struggles long gone,
feathers and crushed bone, on these I reflect.
I'm hoping once more, my arms are still strong.
A pine marten scurries, close to my step,
the sweet scent of birch gum, his claws unearth.
My arrow's still sheathed, for creeks I have leapt.
Though I grow cold, my spirit is re-birthed.
Tracks at the creek, the water I savor
the thicket moves, my aim must not waver.



01/25/14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lindley Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 8:24 AM
A GREAT DAY, for me to find this truly exceptional sonnet! An automatic fav and super 7 my friend..
Goff Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 10:46 AM
Made me smile! Thanks Robert...jim
Kendrick Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 10:11 AM
Way to go !!! Great win...Sara
Mehta Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 1:57 AM
Congratulations on the fine with beautiful sonnet, Jimbo
A  Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 1:10 AM
Jimbo, Congratulations, on your Hunt for a Sonnet Gem. Awesomely done. ~SKAT~
Walker  Avatar
March 14, 2014 at 8:37 PM
Congratulations on the James... Verlena
Eggins Avatar
February 10, 2014 at 7:13 AM
Hi Jimbo, I have a poet friend who writes nature poems and writes about hunting, I grew up shooting a gun for work purposes but I have never been hunting per see BUT I have come to appreciate the hunt through his and now your words, Lovely Sonnet, thanks for your comment on my poem love Jayne
Heckman Avatar
February 9, 2014 at 5:28 PM
nicely done, I love sonnets! Thanks for your comment at my site. Julie
Abedin Avatar
February 7, 2014 at 5:16 PM
Nice work...
Sergi Avatar
January 28, 2014 at 8:04 PM
Jimbo a nice sonnet here. A hunter stalking his prey. Great Job.
Pettit Avatar
January 28, 2014 at 2:21 PM
I've never been a hunter, but everything here is described nicely with good rhyming.
Ryerson Avatar
January 28, 2014 at 11:14 AM
Ah yes Jimbo...You have perfectly captured the thrill of the hunt and the peace of communing with nature in this gem. You references to bows and arrows reminds me of the movie 'Deliverence'...Jon Voight's character has a chance to shoot a deer but starts trembling violently and drops the bow...He does the same thing at the end when he attempts to kill the hillbilly which of course he does...NOT implying that happens to you - Tim
Kendrick Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 7:48 AM
Reads like a nice trek in the woods but not sure if it was in the past and not during this freezing cold weather..Enjoyed reading though this morn..Sara
Campi Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 8:29 PM
An interesting verse. Thanks for posting.
Goff Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 3:04 PM
Deb. David is right...want me to fix?
Williams Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 2:20 PM
Jimbo, I love the content in this it stays firmly with the theme, if I may just say 6th line 11syll, 8th line 9syll, 11th line 9syll, but it may just be how I pronounce them, still a very good contender, well done...much better than mine...David
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