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Stone Concrete

Chasing tail; A dream, Hides secrecy; A love, Open door; locked tight, Only you and I can go. An amazing feel gives me, Roller*Coaster chills; ice-cube, To the bone. This promised experiance never To come down, as we carry these Hearts leveled sight, where we've Bonded friendship in stone; concrete, Forever n' always, as we imprint the World in coulor; R N' C wile rule the riverbed suite in love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/28/2012 8:10:00 AM
you go girl,love it Carma,R n'C OXOXOX
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 7/30/2012 1:00:00 AM
Thank you my angel, our love wile only grow stronger xoxoxo
Date: 7/26/2012 10:22:00 PM
Carma, a sweet deal........... one can only dream to have a love they can't feel. love your smashing poem" SKAT
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 7/27/2012 3:48:00 AM
Thank you skat for the smashing comment, welcome to the sweet n sour side..... xoxo carma
Date: 7/26/2012 6:09:00 AM
Lovely written poem here Carma...lovely tribute!!!
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 7/26/2012 8:00:00 AM
Thank you so much pace I'm. Glad you fuljoyed it!! Xoxo
Date: 7/26/2012 5:28:00 AM
Nice... xx
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 7/26/2012 8:02:00 AM
Thank you mandy tams
Date: 7/26/2012 3:47:00 AM
Sharing all....in dream and love...forever and always, like it Carma, well done. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 7/26/2012 8:06:00 AM
All ways glad to share nuff luv anne_lise xoxoxo

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