Kim Rodrigues Poet Quatrain

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Stone Cold Gold

A mountain high to sit and die.
Antagonist would not depart.
Could not move an inch and keep gold.
Stone - all that’s left of his cold heart.



6/23/2022
Contest: Greed
Sponsor: Margaret Lillico

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Victor Buhagiar June 24, 2022 at 1:43 AM One of the deadly sins: greed. Kim Rodrigues June 24, 2022 at 7:49 AM It sure is and it hurts so many! I hate when kids are asked “what would you do with a million dollars?” Why do we need to teach anyone to have more than they need. Riches and blessings come in many things. God bless!

Sotto Poet June 23, 2022 at 12:13 PM Very well crafted, Kim. Sounds like a great contender for the contest. Best of luck Kim Rodrigues June 23, 2022 at 3:06 PM We will see! Thank you, Lasaad! Kim Rodrigues June 23, 2022 at 3:00 PM We will see! Thank you, Lasaad!

David Kavanagh June 23, 2022 at 8:35 AM Reminds me Kim of the Zac Efron 2020 movie Gold, where greed became the death of them all, great one for the contest, cheers David Kim Rodrigues June 23, 2022 at 8:52 AM Thank you, David!