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Stone Cold

No movement…no life… I cried... when I realized... My pet rock had died

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/17/2012 7:25:00 PM
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Did you keep a funeral,hahahaha,great write David
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David O'Haolin Whalen
Date: 7/17/2012 7:36:00 PM
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No Richard, no funeral, but we did have a rockin' wake! Thanks for reading me. Appreciate ya'
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/16/2012 9:59:00 PM
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a funny one. Did you own one back in the good old 70's?? I loved my moon rocks!!!
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Michelle Mac Donald
Date: 7/15/2012 1:54:00 PM
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LOL...I've a pet rock, Flossie! This reminds me that I'll have to glue it's head back on!:) Best wishes, Mikki:)
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David O'Haolin Whalen
Date: 7/15/2012 8:10:00 PM
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Mikki, Don't ever take Flossie for granite! Hug it, it could just have a heart of gold! (and thanks for reading my silly Senryu.

Book: Shattered Sighs