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Stomping On a Spark

what if we were brain cells communicating to fast for the eye to see only were a baby's brain always growing, living and dying at an accelerate rate now read this again because it explains everything

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Date: 9/24/2010 10:35:00 PM
and on reading again it reads faster as the memory prompts the brain smile ... spelling on dieing/dying ... nice read Jayne
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Date: 9/21/2010 7:53:00 AM
Well expressed thoughts , stomping on a spark, john
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Date: 9/21/2010 2:52:00 AM
Food for thought, feel like I'm on an accelerated rate now. Excellent piece.
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