Stomping On a Rainbow

there you go, stomping
on the rainbow of my heart
emptying the gold


Cynthia
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Pettit Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 11:01 PM
A fanciful poetic way of describing extortion.
Horne Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 12:04 PM
sad but beautiful write, my friend - Congrats on your wins : )
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October 7, 2012 at 6:27 AM
Hey! LOVE this! If you would like to see the blog where I featured your poetry (the poem was JAZZ) go to the top of this screen. There IS a search box 'hidden' in the blue logo bar (see the search UNDER the logout?) Now type in Your name then my name (cyndi macmillan) it is listed under cyndi macmillan's blogs. Hope you're enjoying your weekend. Smiles, Cyndi
Alvez Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 11:45 AM
Cyndi, thank you for the tip. Off to search now. Glad you enjoyed this poem. Cynthia
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October 6, 2012 at 11:25 PM
Cynthia, I really like the message you portray here, with the metaphor of emptying the gold from the rainbow. Well done.
Alvez Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 11:47 AM
Adrea, I am always please to hear from you. Thank you so much! Cynthia
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