Stolen Dreams

Do you ever recall the times we played together
Do you even remember the jokes we told one another
Maybe you think about those endless summer nights
And with the easy flow of the river the fireflies delights

I know you cannot forget our shared secrets
When my elder brother would look for us so vexed
When we raced all day and ate melted ice creams at noon
When we swam in the ocean so inviting and warm
Do you remember the years we grew so close
Do you think about the day you gave me that rose

I still remember the time you told me you were going
And you promised me forever under the great old oak
And when summer drew to a close our sad goodbye
When you went away never to come back my way

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 6/11/2008 6:37:00 PM
Hello Fathima I had a flashback of a childhood love those were the days of the innocence.Continue to write.Thank you for your comments. B BLRSS Crystal
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Date: 6/11/2008 6:26:00 PM
Sometimes some of our best memories are our painful memories, this is melancholy and romantic at the same time a great write, take care, D-nyce
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Date: 6/11/2008 4:22:00 AM
Wonderful memories you share ere and sad in that they exist no more, but yet they are happy memories, of a good time in ones life. Wonderful flow to this read and just a perfect write. Michael
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Date: 6/11/2008 3:39:00 AM
Now I really need to get my box of kleenex, this is so beautiful and sad...my dear, this is gorgeous, and so well written. If this is true, I am so sorry, how tragic. XO Peace to you, Kristin
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