Stitching Skies' Stories

mountain ridges of clouds
  o'er my windshield spread
interspersed, baby-blue patches
  brilliant spaces, like threads
stitching skies' stories together
  a hobbled glance ahead of
cars tethered to a 
  snarled, honking freeway,
blustery rage moving in, I dread
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 6:20 AM
I have been there - one second, blue skies and rainbows. The next minute "snarled, honking freeway, blustery rage moving in"
Buehler Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 8:59 PM
Your imagery is vivid and wonderful, Gershon. The contrasting scenes are quite interesting, as well. Blessings, Evelyn
Ligon Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 8:56 PM
"Stitching skies' stories together" -- I love it! There are different vantage points from each section of the sky.
Gauthier Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 6:56 PM
Road rage is unpleasant ~ but I like your poem. Love the very effective gradation in it.
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