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Stitching Skies' Stories

mountain ridges of clouds o'er my windshield spread interspersed, baby-blue patches brilliant spaces, like threads stitching skies' stories together a hobbled glance ahead of cars tethered to a snarled, honking freeway, blustery rage moving in, I dread

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Date: 4/12/2021 6:20:00 AM
I have been there - one second, blue skies and rainbows. The next minute "snarled, honking freeway, blustery rage moving in"
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Date: 4/11/2021 8:59:00 PM
Your imagery is vivid and wonderful, Gershon. The contrasting scenes are quite interesting, as well. Blessings, Evelyn
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Date: 4/11/2021 8:56:00 PM
"Stitching skies' stories together" -- I love it! There are different vantage points from each section of the sky.
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Date: 4/11/2021 6:56:00 PM
Road rage is unpleasant ~ but I like your poem. Love the very effective gradation in it.
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