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December.13.2024
Stirring my Tea Poetry Contest
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Stirring my Tea

In the morning I heard the tea pot singing, With the amber liquid sizzling, Saw spouts of vapor ejecting, With a sweet aroma tickling. While pouring my cup of steaming tea, Adding some cream, a little sugar and stirring it I thought of the magic effect it brings, Reviving us on every morning and keeping us fit. As we sip it while we scan the news paper We feel the early languor being lifted, Keeping us hydrated throughout the day, With our cognitive abilities liberally assisted. I feel there is nothing like a cup of well blended tea, For a tired soul to enliven his body. It’s delicious taste and delicate fragrance, Make it everyone’s lovesome buddy! It’s a heavenly drink for the torpid minds, A beverage brewed from the best of leaves. A magic potion for the feverish lips, Which in tiresome hours, everyone craves. Sure, teatime is the most pleasant family time. How we babble and burble over a cup of tea Drawing people closer and cementing relations. Certainly, it’s a time to look forward with glee.
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Dietrich Avatar
December 25, 2023 at 8:46 PM
Wow you are showing some incredible poetry this season. You are a talented lady.
DiMino Avatar
December 19, 2023 at 8:59 PM
Beautiful write. Indeed, quality time with loved ones -- a cup of tea, some pleasantries are precious. It would be a far better world for all.
One Avatar
December 19, 2023 at 12:23 PM
Your poem is a delightful ode to the simple yet profound joys of tea.. Painting a vivid picture of the popular ritual. The personification of the tea pot singing and the amber liquid sizzling adds a charming touch, bringing the act of brewing tea to life. The imagery of spouts of vapor ejecting and the sweet aroma tickling creates a multisensory experience that resonates with anyone who appreciates the magic of a good cup of tea... BOL in the contest dear.
Empress Avatar
December 19, 2023 at 11:00 AM
A beautiful poem this is valsa, you’ve made tea sound poetic and so inviting and a way to share something strong and soulful with loved ones. Your way of painting imagery in such a descriptive manner is so impressive. I can hear the sound of stirring tea and smell tea too: theres this specific tea i love from indian flavors. Masala chai, one of the best but not many can make it as good as what we can get in india. Its definitely one of my fave teas. Its always my pleasure reading you: fave it is
Narain Avatar
December 19, 2023 at 10:09 AM
A family tea time brings nostalgic memories. It is the time of friendship and strong human bondage.
Goldsmith Avatar
December 19, 2023 at 6:37 AM
I enjoyed your fun tea write/picture. Good Luck... Looks like we both did this one. Have a Very Blessed Christmas & New Year 2023.......................
Rodrigues Avatar
December 19, 2023 at 6:01 AM
A lovely poem about tea! Enjoyed a sip! Merry Christmas, Valsa!
Sangster - K Avatar
December 19, 2023 at 5:57 AM
A enjoyable read for me this morning. Tea is my favourite beverage. Smiles, Anne :-)
Proxenos Avatar
December 19, 2023 at 1:31 AM
My favorite beverage, morning afternoon and night. There is nothing better than a cup of tea to revive the senses every morning. Beautiful write my dear friend. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
Meadows Avatar
December 19, 2023 at 12:11 AM
I love a cup of tea!! Brilliant poem. Well written.
Cunningham Avatar
December 19, 2023 at 12:05 AM
Nothing beats a good cup of tea to start your day off. Good luck Valsa. Tom
Roper Avatar
December 18, 2023 at 11:04 PM
You make the tea so inviting, especially since the days are getting cold. Well said my friend. May you and your family have a wonderful Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year. Hugs eve
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