Sara Kendrick Poet Fibonacci

Stinky Feet

Feet
Feet stink
Feet stinking 
Foot odor bad now
Shoes off odor penetrates air
Odor flows gradually around room uncomfortable
Odor flows gradually around room very uncomfortable someone please grab the Frebreze

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Marie Foster August 6, 2009 at 12:48 PM this one gave me a laugh

James Fraser August 3, 2009 at 2:55 AM Gave me a laugh Sara, James

William Kershaw August 2, 2009 at 4:15 PM Sara, This was a welcome chuckle on an otherwise very unpleasant day. Been there, smelled that. Used the T-shirt to cover my nose. Excellent write. Love, Will

William Kershaw August 2, 2009 at 4:14 PM Sara, This was a welcome chuckle on an otherwise very unpleasant day. Been there, smelled that. Used the T-shirt to cover my nose. Excellent write. Love, Will

Christopher Higgins August 2, 2009 at 11:22 AM LOL....funny write my friend..love the last line..brought a smile.