Beautiful Scars Poet Limerick

Stinky Bunny

There once was a magician in Vegas,
who needed a flat more spacious,
the bunny from his hat,
was peculiarly fat,
stinky farts from carrots were contagious!


Rhyme Scheme: A-A-B-B-A

Date Written: February 20, 2016

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Teddy Kimathi June 9, 2016 at 8:59 AM Hi Laura. Congrats for your placement in the contest!! ;-)

Jan Allison March 7, 2016 at 9:24 AM many congrats LuLoo - I found your syllable count was out otherwise you would have placed higher:-) hugs jan xx Beautiful Scars March 8, 2016 at 1:35 PM Thank you Jan, I am embarrassed I didn't have syllable count that you were looking for. Thank you :)-luloo *smiles*

Susan Gentry March 6, 2016 at 8:38 PM Congratulations on your win! :)

Eve Roper March 6, 2016 at 8:35 PM haha... nice write, Laura, congratulations on your limerick win a 7 :) Hugs Eve Beautiful Scars March 8, 2016 at 1:34 PM Thank you lady Eve :)-luloo

Andrea Dietrich March 6, 2016 at 7:38 PM HA!! great finish line. Congrats on this one. Beautiful Scars March 8, 2016 at 1:33 PM Thank you Andrea :)-luloo

Michael Tor February 20, 2016 at 9:13 PM lol loved this Laura... Beautiful Scars February 21, 2016 at 9:10 AM Many thanks Michael...-luloo

Suzanne Delaney February 20, 2016 at 7:58 PM Jan will love this one.....he might disappear but his stinkies will still be there ha ha SuZ Beautiful Scars February 21, 2016 at 9:09 AM haha yes they will! Thank you Suzanne for your kind words :)-luloo

Daniel Turner February 20, 2016 at 5:14 PM Very funny. I know all to well about that with Buddy. Great limerick. Good luck Peace:) Beautiful Scars February 20, 2016 at 5:16 PM Funny because I DO have a white fluffy bunny and he has bad gas a lot... It where I got this idea.. I don't care he's so darn cute it doesn't matter! :)

Jill Spagnola February 20, 2016 at 1:42 PM A 7 Laura and an A+ for adorable :)..lol, jill Beautiful Scars February 20, 2016 at 2:17 PM thank you Jill, you are sweet :)-luloo *Smiles*