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Stinky Bunny

There once was a magician in Vegas, who needed a flat more spacious, the bunny from his hat, was peculiarly fat, stinky farts from carrots were contagious! Rhyme Scheme: A-A-B-B-A Date Written: February 20, 2016

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Date: 6/9/2016 8:59:00 AM
Hi Laura. Congrats for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 3/7/2016 9:24:00 AM
many congrats LuLoo - I found your syllable count was out otherwise you would have placed higher:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/8/2016 1:35:00 PM
Thank you Jan, I am embarrassed I didn't have syllable count that you were looking for. Thank you :)-luloo *smiles*
Date: 3/6/2016 8:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 3/6/2016 8:35:00 PM
haha... nice write, Laura, congratulations on your limerick win a 7 :) Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/8/2016 1:34:00 PM
Thank you lady Eve :)-luloo
Date: 3/6/2016 7:38:00 PM
HA!! great finish line. Congrats on this one.
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Date: 3/8/2016 1:33:00 PM
Thank you Andrea :)-luloo
Date: 2/20/2016 9:13:00 PM
lol loved this Laura...
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Date: 2/21/2016 9:10:00 AM
Many thanks Michael...-luloo
Date: 2/20/2016 7:58:00 PM
Jan will love this one.....he might disappear but his stinkies will still be there ha ha SuZ
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Date: 2/21/2016 9:09:00 AM
haha yes they will! Thank you Suzanne for your kind words :)-luloo
Date: 2/20/2016 5:14:00 PM
Very funny. I know all to well about that with Buddy. Great limerick. Good luck Peace:)
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Date: 2/20/2016 5:16:00 PM
Funny because I DO have a white fluffy bunny and he has bad gas a lot... It where I got this idea.. I don't care he's so darn cute it doesn't matter! :)
Date: 2/20/2016 1:42:00 PM
A 7 Laura and an A+ for adorable :)..lol, jill
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Date: 2/20/2016 2:17:00 PM
thank you Jill, you are sweet :)-luloo *Smiles*

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