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This poem stinks
Write, scratch, think, scream
Just blink, thoughts gone  

Contest: Any theme Than-Bauk Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Charles Messina
Written: 01-31-2019

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Jan Allison

Date: 2/13/2019 3:48:00 PM

made me smile Sara, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Charles Messina

Date: 2/11/2019 8:11:00 AM

One thing for sure Sara, this poem does not stink (lol) love the humor. Congratulations on your placement in my contest. hugs Charlie

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/11/2019 11:01:00 AM

Charles, Thanks for the comment to let me know I placed and that my poem doesn't stink but is humorous which I intended it to be. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/11/2019 6:20:00 AM

Just stopping by with congrats on your win, Sara!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/11/2019 6:26:00 AM

Carolyn, Thanks for dropping by with congrats. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/2/2019 5:21:00 PM

Sara, I really love the premise of this one and hope you don't get docked for leaving off S on the two rhymes with stinks. I find this form terribly difficult to do because of only four syllables per line!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/2/2019 7:39:00 PM

Andrea, If Charles wants to dock me well that is okay. It is his contest and he can judge it however he wants. Thanks for the visit to my page. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/1/2019 6:21:00 AM

We are often not satisfied with our words, Sara, and no sooner do they come to us than they rush away. Excellent Than Bauk! Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/1/2019 7:25:00 AM

Carolyn, Poems can be a bit of a problem to get all the elements doing what we want but sometimes if we keep working the end results can be nice. Thanks for dropping by. Sara