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Stillness of Night

As nightfall wanes over the hills

To trail away, in quietude

My calm eyes watch a hollowed view

Evanescing into dusk’s edge.





Night Silence Contest, Nayda Ivette Negron
6/14/2016

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Connie Marcum Wong

June 17, 2016 at 3:51 PM

I love this Nette! You have captured twilight stunningly and your poem is a favorite of those posted. It is number one in my opinion because of the spiritual feelings it evokes. Brava! Congratulations on your high most deserving placement! 7+ ; )

Sunita U.D Palawon

June 14, 2016 at 10:11 AM

Congrats this is enchanting.

Carly Lalion

June 14, 2016 at 2:44 AM

This is so dreamy--an excellent melody of night. Congratulations!

Karam Misra

June 14, 2016 at 12:57 AM

What a wonderful prelude to nightfall! I love crepuscle and your images were wonderful. For me, Nightfall also brings in memories of bats flying out for the night. Congrats on your wonderful poem and win, Nette. ~karam~