Home » Poems » Nette Onclaud » Stillness of Night

Stillness of Night

As nightfall wanes over the hills To trail away, in quietude My calm eyes watch a hollowed view Evanescing into dusk’s edge. Night Silence Contest, Nayda Ivette Negron 6/14/2016

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/17/2016 3:51:00 PM

I love this Nette! You have captured twilight stunningly and your poem is a favorite of those posted. It is number one in my opinion because of the spiritual feelings it evokes. Brava! Congratulations on your high most deserving placement! 7+ ; )

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 6/14/2016 10:11:00 AM

Congrats this is enchanting.

Carly Lalion

Date: 6/14/2016 2:44:00 AM

This is so dreamy--an excellent melody of night. Congratulations!

Karam Misra

Date: 6/14/2016 12:57:00 AM

What a wonderful prelude to nightfall! I love crepuscle and your images were wonderful. For me, Nightfall also brings in memories of bats flying out for the night. Congrats on your wonderful poem and win, Nette. ~karam~

Seren Roberts

Date: 6/14/2016 12:28:00 AM

Congratulations Nette.....Seren

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 6/13/2016 8:18:00 PM

Congratulationgs Nette on the placement

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/13/2016 6:38:00 PM

So beautiful, I imagining being at that very moment, with someone beside, enjoying the beauty of the stillness and the silence. hugs!