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Stillness of Night

As nightfall wanes over the hills To trail away, in quietude My calm eyes watch a hollowed view Evanescing into dusk’s edge. Night Silence Contest, Nayda Ivette Negron 6/14/2016

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/17/2016 3:51:00 PM

I love this Nette! You have captured twilight stunningly and your poem is a favorite of those posted. It is number one in my opinion because of the spiritual feelings it evokes. Brava! Congratulations on your high most deserving placement! 7+ ; )

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 6/14/2016 10:11:00 AM

Congrats this is enchanting.

Carly Lalion

Date: 6/14/2016 2:44:00 AM

This is so dreamy--an excellent melody of night. Congratulations!

Karam Misra

Date: 6/14/2016 12:57:00 AM

What a wonderful prelude to nightfall! I love crepuscle and your images were wonderful. For me, Nightfall also brings in memories of bats flying out for the night. Congrats on your wonderful poem and win, Nette. ~karam~

Seren Roberts

Date: 6/14/2016 12:28:00 AM

Congratulations Nette.....Seren

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 6/13/2016 8:18:00 PM

Congratulationgs Nette on the placement

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/13/2016 6:38:00 PM

So beautiful, I imagining being at that very moment, with someone beside, enjoying the beauty of the stillness and the silence. hugs!