Rama Balasubramanian Poet Free verse

Stillness

Watching out of windows
lush green mountains on a rainy day
I saw fog slowly descent from up
It covered the mountain, spread all over the surroundings
Nothing was visible except white fog
Felt I was in sky, heaven surrounded by clouds
There was no noise
birds hiding, trees still, no breeze,
no movement whatsoever
I felt tranquil and joyous

31.10.2021
For
Constance La France
Contest Name	''S'' Contest

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Paula Goldsmith November 7, 2021 at 10:05 AM Congratulations on your win. A lovely story/write. I feel like I am there. Have a blessed day with your win...............

Constance La France November 6, 2021 at 6:02 AM Rama, wonderful and joyous writing and congratulations on your Third Place win in my "S" Contest ~ love and serenity_ Constance Rama Balasubramanian November 6, 2021 at 7:48 AM Thanks

Christuraj Alex November 6, 2021 at 12:43 AM Vivid illustration of one's being carried away by the silent stillness. Great work! Congratulations! Rama Balasubramanian November 6, 2021 at 7:48 AM Thanks

Krish Radhakrishna October 31, 2021 at 11:50 AM I use to live in the Nilagiri hills! This was a constant occurrence!! You take me back 35 years!! Rama Balasubramanian October 31, 2021 at 12:09 PM Thanks. That made me smile. Saw this from bedroom window on rainy day

Tom Cunningham October 31, 2021 at 11:43 AM The wonders of creation that never ceases to amaze me. Tom Rama Balasubramanian October 31, 2021 at 12:08 PM Thanks