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stillness hovering in mother's midnight garden~ gentle sudden breeze * a tribute to Constance's mother's garden * Submitted on July 22, 2020 for contest HAIKU OR SENRYU sponsored by CONSTANCE LA FRANCE - RANKED 1ST

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Constance La France

Date: 7/29/2020 4:36:00 PM

Line, congratulations on your win in my haiku contest with this excellent write, a FAV for me and I really love your image too _Constance

Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/28/2020 11:55:00 AM

That lovely gentle breeze gives a soothing touch to your muse Line. Congratulations on your win! :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/28/2020 6:00:00 PM

Thanks, Aditi. Much appreciated ~

Patri Venkata Ramana

Date: 7/28/2020 2:54:00 AM

Lovely imagery. Congrats.

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/28/2020 5:27:00 AM

Thank you, Patri. Much appreciated ~

V. Deepa

Date: 7/27/2020 1:02:00 AM

Lovely turn in the last line.Loved the imagery. Congrats on your top win line mam:-) Keep inspiring.Warm regards~Deepa:-)

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/27/2020 1:59:00 AM

Thanks, Deepa. Much appreciated ~

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 7/26/2020 10:18:00 PM

A beauty...full of tranquil imagery. Congrats!

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/27/2020 2:00:00 AM

Thanks, Jeanne. Much appreciated ~

Jenish Somadas

Date: 7/26/2020 10:12:00 PM

Wonderful imagery Line.. Congrats on your great win...

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/27/2020 2:00:00 AM

Thank, Jenish. Much appreciated ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2020 4:50:00 PM

excellent turn on last line. I love that contrast, LIne. big congrats on a well deserved win.

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/26/2020 9:49:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. Much appreciated ~

Eve Roper

Date: 7/26/2020 3:17:00 PM

Wonderful imagery, Line, congratulations on your win with these beautiful Haiku. An amazing photo. Hugs Eve

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/26/2020 4:49:00 PM

Thanks, much appreciated ~

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/26/2020 2:59:00 PM

A nice tribute! Congratulations!

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/26/2020 4:49:00 PM

Thanks ~

Jan Allison

Date: 7/26/2020 1:52:00 PM

such a moving piece Line, :-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/26/2020 2:47:00 PM

Thanks, Jan. Much appreciated ~

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/26/2020 11:23:00 AM

- Congratulations on your lovely haiku, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/26/2020 2:47:00 PM

Thanks, Sunshine ~

Paul Callus

Date: 7/26/2020 11:21:00 AM

I love those sudden breezes, Line, especially in these hot summer nights! Yours is a delightful winning poem...congratulations! Regards // paul

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/26/2020 2:47:00 PM

Thanks, Paul. Much appreciated.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/26/2020 11:13:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful picture to go with your beautiful write. Enjoy your win and day................

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/26/2020 2:47:00 PM

Thank you, Paula ~

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/25/2020 12:15:00 AM

The sudden summer breeze was perfect touch, my friend.

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/25/2020 5:02:00 AM

Thanks, much appreciated ~

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/24/2020 4:14:00 AM

Very sweet! Love the sudden but gentle wind!

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/24/2020 6:41:00 AM

Thanks, Kim ~

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/22/2020 5:46:00 PM

Lovely penned for the contest, Line! G.L! :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/23/2020 10:55:00 AM

Thanks, Gershon. Much appreciated ~

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/22/2020 5:37:00 PM

What a beautiful picture of summer solitude in a garden, Line. Good luck in the contest.

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/23/2020 10:55:00 AM

Thanks, Sam. Much appreciated ~

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 7/22/2020 4:20:00 PM

Love it! I find myself in the garden many late nights. I enjoy the stillness, the sounds and the breeze. Thank you for the memory.

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/23/2020 10:56:00 AM

Lovely ~ thanks, Timothy.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/22/2020 6:22:00 AM

Very nice breeze, Line:)

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/22/2020 10:46:00 AM

Thanks, Jo. Much appreciated ~