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Still-Life Autumn

season gracefully tantalizing our senses , 
filling our arid heart with euphoric delight...
autumn.. tiptoeing softly with secret steps, veiled,
in a soothing miraculous cascade of light. 


invigorating stroll around the block, spotted
on the tall maple ..cerise, tangerine, red leaves,
delightful roses are still beaming, a few sprawled,
strewn at ground, dejected petals summer's dreams weave. 


crimson, orange, amber, scarlet hued autumn-leaves
twirling, swirling, spiralling, in the golden breeze, 
waltzing down, decoupage of kaleidoscopic 
glorious beauty, swooshing around tranquil trees!


feel fleecy warmth of mellow air fleeting away, 
warm sun shines on ruby apples, milkweed seeds fly,
bountiful maples ready for tapping, serene 
comforting childhood is back in memory's eye.


intoxicated with aroma of sunshine, 
playful autumn lures us gleefully gamble in 
riot of colours, beauty of a fairyland
a rare painting by nature, pageant sure to win!


                    December 14, 2022
         The above painting is done by myself. 
       "Still-life Autumn Scene" Poetry Contest
                    Sponsor: Eve Roper
   12 syllables in each line - checked by HMS.com
         rhyme checked by rhyme-zone.com
                       SECOND PLACE
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Goldsmith Avatar
December 29, 2022 at 9:15 AM
Congratulations on your win. I love this write/picture. Wish I was on your bench.  Have a Blessed/Healthy/Great New Year 2023............
Ray Choudhury Avatar
December 29, 2022 at 2:03 PM
Dear Paula, Thank you so much. That bench lures me too to a divine wonderland!
Alex Avatar
December 28, 2022 at 9:14 PM
"gracefully tantalizing our senses", "delightful roses", "intoxicated with aroma of sunshine" - Wow! Very beautiful work. Your works have always been a great inspiration for me. Congratulations!
Roper Avatar
December 28, 2022 at 5:53 PM
Malabika, you set a wonderful scene with lots of color like your painting, and walked me there. Congratulations on your win. Many blessings to you
Ray Choudhury Avatar
December 29, 2022 at 2:02 PM
Thank you, Eve, for my placement. I feel honoured!
Callus Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 3:16 AM
Imagery, personification, rhyme and a sprinkling of alliteration give life to this "still-life" poem, Mala. All it needs now is paints and brushes to preserve it on canvas for years to come. ~ Regards & Blessings // paul
Callus Avatar
December 29, 2022 at 2:32 PM
Yes...I've seen it; love it!! well done
Ray Choudhury Avatar
December 29, 2022 at 2:02 PM
Hi Paul, thanks so much for your comment. I have actually added a painting of mine - hope you like it.
Kendrick Avatar
December 17, 2022 at 9:28 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Isn't Autumn beautiful. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Ray Choudhury Avatar
December 29, 2022 at 2:00 PM
Thanks, Sara. Yes, Autumn is truly beautiful - probably my most favourite season!
George Avatar
December 14, 2022 at 9:05 PM
What a cheerful scene you have painted 'of autumn tip toeing with secret steps and the leaves twiring, swirling , spiraling and swooshing around tranquil trees'. Also the maple trees standing ready for tapping ! So lovely, dear Mala. All the Best!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
December 15, 2022 at 5:16 AM
Dear Valsa, Thank you for visiting and reading my poem. I get inspired when I read beautiful poems by you and other gifted poets. Makes me happy to be in such a lovely community of poets. Love ~ Mala
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 14, 2022 at 3:22 PM
Hello Mala, I love the way you refer to Autumn in this poem. You describe Autumn very well. Love & Friendship /Darlene/ Merry Christmas
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 14, 2022 at 3:40 PM
Hello Mala, Thank you. I enjoye this poem. Love & Frienship /Darlene
Ray Choudhury Avatar
December 14, 2022 at 3:27 PM
Thank you, Dear Darlene. Your comment is so precious! Merry Christmas to you. Mala
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