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Still You Held My Hand

You held my hand and asked me to dance We danced and you held my hand You didn’t look into my eyes - Still you held my hand My fingers gently caressed your back You were aware of my barest touch You didn’t look into my eyes - Still you held my hand We danced again, my touch grew stronger You wanted it to, you whispered You didn’t look into my eyes - Still you held my hand We danced together in the crowd There was no crowd just us We danced together you and I - And still you held my hand I wondered what may come I wished for what may happen You wanted to, you whispered As still - you held my hand Your touch I felt so gently At first I wasn’t sure And then your touch came stronger - You wanted to I heard you whisper to yourself I understood your reasons You wanted to, you whispered As still - you held my hand Our lips came close together And just before they touched You wanted to - you whispered As still - you held my hand Your lips touched mine so briefly You wanted to - you would Your lips met mine so softly You wanted to - you could We looked into each other’s eyes You wanted to - you couldn’t We looked into each other’s eyes You wanted to - you wouldn’t 21st January 2019

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Date: 3/2/2019 10:20:00 AM
Really love your creation. Panagiota
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Date: 1/22/2019 12:44:00 AM
Yes, i felt it was very original also. I think sometimes people get too wrapped up in obscure vocabulay trying to bring this sort of complexity to there writing, and losing the point of what there saying cuz its got too many layers to it.
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Tracy Somerville
Date: 2/13/2019 1:27:00 PM
Wow I feel like a proper poet after your comment. Thank you.

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