Still Walking and Breathing

It's sad to reminisce the memory of those
who have long left our world without a chance for goodbyes....
I was left behind for an unexplainable reason
to fulfill a task with a true purpose;
and still walking and breathing I go on,
gathering tiny fragments of stories never told by writers.



Sometimes I tell myself," Why was I continuously spared?"
" Why do I have to be the last one to leave?" 
Those answers will be given to me when I'll grieve,
and close to death : I will hear them through the voice of the Lord. 
And instead of receiving comfort, I will generously give it...
even to the enemy who once despised my honesty; 
and coexisting with everyone, I will uphold my ethical code and go forth,
not cogitating the mystery of my unblemished identity.



Many before me have achieved this by resisting change,
not adapting to the new moralities dictated by society,
but the result was too tragic and gruesome for all to accept reality;
and as lepers with open wounds, they still indulged in pleasure,
hiding their disease with canning lies and eloquent flair....
I would cut off my own hands, rather than share the unclean thing!  



And still walking and breathing, my arduous mission must be complete:
neither ridicule nor contemptible looks will make me put my rod away!
I'll stick to my convictions and move on to delight in another blessed day,
and as bewildered as they may be, I refuse to be compassionate...
they must understand the purpose of my birth,
identify those works and deeds that give me worth,
then the outcome wouldn't be short of a miracle;
and ebullient as they appear, I suspect they will tremble!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/28/2011 11:07:00 PM
This is most profound, Andrew. You seem to be a very spiritual and thinking man. Great poetry.
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Date: 4/28/2011 1:42:00 PM
Those of us who have experienced many lost loved ones often wonder why we are "still walking and breathing," Andrew. Sure, we will be reunited with them in heaven, but enduring life on Earth without them is so difficult. Your poem reminded me of so many friends and family members who have passed. There is a purpose for us to still be here, though, so hold tight to that rod and keep moving forward. Excellent, insightful poem! Love, Carolyn
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