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Still Tomorrow the Sun Will Rise

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a few missing pieces ones we may never find the beast stares down at us just waiting to pounce three bloodied blind eyes can't see the pink butterflies psychedelic lies flow down stairs colourless swirls checker board squares check where's your mate blind in life blind in death who will save us save us save us from us students with razor blades cut their arms in school no one questions their scars it takes a village to raise a child only women carry the bleeding lily have to answer to strange twisted clocks strum a lonely shape on strings that bite play till the tips break until the skin shows bone who will save them save them save them from us wounded hands won't speak to me maybe people just die no mention of our sins grey clouds loom over earth where is the man who parted the waters the large belly the long beard where is the one whose image is ours is it true seek and you shall find who will save us save us save us from us Sept. 20 2016 MY

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/8/2017 2:59:00 PM

Hello Maurice. The words are very expressive with strength and inspiration especially the ending. This is an entry to be read out loud. Honestly. May the sun always rise for one and all for every reason. Well done entirely.

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/6/2016 11:35:00 AM

This takes many readings, so as not to miss the impact, and the meaning....and each time I hear and read one more amazingly metaphoric injustice, and truth. You write brilliantly, Armand, and your praise on my own poetry is an honor. I thank you :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/7/2016 6:27:00 AM

We are blind to life, a women's ticking is the only natural thing... ;). Maurice, you own so many words.... this pours like a force of nature.... Time to take another sip of life. Linda

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/24/2016 12:28:00 PM

Hi Armand, You have penned a deep thought provoking piece. A without seven and a fav:-) Alexis

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/23/2016 1:21:00 PM

Lots to think about with this, a fog of the darkness of life, powerfully pieced together. Hugs xxx

Jan Allison

Date: 9/22/2016 4:19:00 PM

You send a powerful message with your fascinating imagery Armand and I Love the title - long as the sun rises and i wake to see it I am happy :-) hugs jan xx

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/22/2016 5:00:00 PM

You are a survivor above all else. A very impressive woman to say the least. God bless you!

Joseph May

Date: 9/22/2016 2:24:00 PM

We await the saving graces of the Saviour...Well written....A7

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/22/2016 3:02:00 PM

Yes we are, God Bless You my dear friend.

Joseph May
Date: 9/22/2016 2:24:00 PM

Tim Smith

Date: 9/21/2016 10:16:00 PM

Great poem my friend...so many great lines....a fav

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/22/2016 3:31:00 PM

God Bless you Tim!

Miraj Raha

Date: 9/21/2016 5:29:00 AM

A universal poem that should be read by everybody,Such powerful is its message.You are a people's poet Sir Maurice, Brilliant work.

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/22/2016 3:30:00 PM

God Bless!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2016 7:35:00 PM

Armand, you truly have a gift! The way you think of unique ways to say things we all think about. I wish I could be more like you in that area. Stunning imagery in your message. Fave.

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/22/2016 3:05:00 PM

God Bless You Andrea!

Carol B.

Date: 9/20/2016 4:37:00 PM

Love this poem. Your poem is so thought provoking and blows my mind. "A fav." Carol :)

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/22/2016 3:05:00 PM

God Bless!

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/22/2016 3:05:00 PM

Thanks for the fav!