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Still the Worst Job Ever

Still the Worst Job Ever How do I hold thee, let me count the ways. I hold thee trembling, beneath kitchen sinks crouched in the darkness of the brightest days guiding thy beam as his patience shrinks. I hold thee dulled by lightning’s fearsome flash shakily awaiting unseen anger tortured by the inevitable crash intrigued by the neediness of danger. I hold thee wide eyed in dirt-floored cellar your flame slow flickering on edge of sight dimming through the range of yellowed color draining the darkness from a darkened night. I hold thee, for my brothers all have fled I hold thee, not knowing what they dread. 11/13/2014 Submitted for - Sara Kendrick - Jobs – Poetry Contest

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Date: 12/28/2014 8:34:00 PM
brilliant take on the theme - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/17/2014 1:33:00 AM
I remember being the flashlight holder, too. Sometimes it was up in the dark, dusty attic or out in the garage when my uncle was fixing his car. Not fun!... I really enjoyed this creative write, John. Great work! Congrats on your win!
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John Lawless
Date: 12/17/2014 3:47:00 PM
Yeah Kelly, if we heard dad ask "where's my flashlight" it looked like a fire drill as we all fled. Thanks for your support,
Date: 12/12/2014 9:05:00 PM
congratulations John on your win
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John Lawless
Date: 12/17/2014 3:46:00 PM
Thanks Robert
Date: 12/11/2014 9:36:00 PM
Brilliant take on this John. Congratulations on your win.
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John Lawless
Date: 12/17/2014 3:45:00 PM
Thanks Brenda for your support
Date: 12/11/2014 9:25:00 PM
A unique take on this theme. I remember being a "holder" too..Enjoyed and congrats. BG
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John Lawless
Date: 12/17/2014 3:45:00 PM
Yup, no easy task...pointing the light where someone else's eyes are looking.
Date: 12/11/2014 12:00:00 PM
John, I am thinking that this is a flash light that you were holding for your daddy to do something where there was no light but not sure exactly what it is..It is a good work and thanks for sharing part of your life with us..Sara
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John Lawless
Date: 12/11/2014 6:00:00 PM
You got it Sara. The worst job ever in life.....usually prefaced by the words "get over here and hold this flashlight for me". Thanks for you input and support.
Date: 12/11/2014 8:51:00 AM
Nice write on the theme and well crafted, congrats on the win
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John Lawless
Date: 12/11/2014 6:00:00 PM
Thank you for your continued support Dr. Mehta.
Date: 11/13/2014 7:45:00 PM
I feel the dank, dark, depth of a dirt-floored cellar......well done !!!
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John Lawless
Date: 12/11/2014 5:58:00 PM
Hey, Carrie, sorry for the delay in response I've been falling behind due to family and work. Thanks for you comment and kind words.

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