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The moment we met our two hearts fluttered So shy was I my words became stuttered Rainbows covered the sky multicoloured The exact moment love was discovered. I could barely hear the muttered response Yet I knew what you had uttered at once Who needs poetry with fine fancy fonts When the eyes say all a girl in love wants. 'Twas long ago, I no longer stutter How I love the endearments you utter In the quiet of night when you mutter “I'm still the one who makes your heart flutter.” * * 22nd September 2020 MAX 14 lines POEM-inspired prompt Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier Words in bold type written by Line Gauthier.

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Date: 9/24/2020 2:25:00 PM
So beautifully romantic poem! Eyes do indeed say it all--well put in your heartfelt emotive verses. All the best, Belle.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/24/2020 3:10:00 PM
Thank you Vijay for your encouraging words and good wishes. Belle
Date: 9/22/2020 9:23:00 AM
Wonderful lines of your sonnet fit the theme quite nicely, Belle.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/22/2020 3:38:00 PM
Thank you Jenna, your comments are much appreciated. Belle

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