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Still the Dust Sings

after ‘The waste Land’, by T.S. Eliot I met a woman on a glitching screen, her face a whisk of pixels and prayer. She spoke of shattered systems and survived code, “The cloud remembers everything,” she said, "but forgets what matters.” A rat hurried through my feed at dawn, past memes and headlines, each a kind of omen. I tried to fast-forward spring, but April clawed through my notifications anyway. In a thread of ghost towns and tagged regret, I noticed a cafe with no floor, only static, A man sipped Espresso beside a socket, charging his distress while waiting for replies. Data rains in blasts, all prediction and pop-ups. The Sun sets in Beta, and we refresh the silence, hoping for something new to load. For then, below algorithms and ash, a bud breaks code in cracked concrete, muted, untagged, but blooming still.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 6/23/2025 9:21:00 AM
Nice take on the tech revolution Saivi. There's good, bad and neutral applications but in the end, God's marvel of creation stands supreme, even through a cracked sidewalk
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Saivi Kurian
Date: 6/23/2025 9:56:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words Tom :)

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