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Still the Dust Sings

after  ‘The  waste  Land’,  by  T.S. Eliot

I met a woman on a glitching screen,
her face a whisk of pixels and prayer.
She spoke of shattered systems and survived code,
“The cloud remembers everything,” she said, "but forgets what matters.”

A rat hurried through my feed at dawn,
past memes and headlines, each a kind of omen.
I tried to fast-forward spring, 
but April clawed through my notifications anyway.

In a thread of ghost towns and tagged regret,
I noticed a cafe with no floor, only static,
A man sipped Espresso beside a socket,
charging his distress while waiting for replies.

Data rains in blasts, all prediction and pop-ups.
The Sun sets in Beta, 
and we refresh the silence, 
hoping for something new to load.

For then, below algorithms and ash, 
a bud breaks code in cracked concrete, 
muted, untagged, 
but blooming still.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Toney Avatar
July 13, 2025 at 8:05 AM
Brilliant! Love the “charging his distress while waiting for replies,” and the positivity of the last stanza. A Fav poem for me.
Kurian Avatar
July 13, 2025 at 9:05 AM
Thank you for seeing the soul between my lines—it means the world :)
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