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Still Life With Persimmons

In the wooden bowl
Persimmons on the table
Next to the fruit cake
Half eaten on a large plate
Leftover cheese and crackers

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/6/2009 3:02:00 PM
Nice tanka Jim, makes me think of cheese and crackers...Raul
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Date: 1/5/2009 4:26:00 PM
I would paint this one...that is if I don't eat it all up, before I get out my paint box! Loved this Tanka! ~ Carrie
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