Still Hungry

From start to finish
today my sister and I walked the woods. 
We mimicked the wildlife and crossed the creek.
We told stories in the sunlight and shade
and peeped at the birds.

Thirty years ago 
these same birds' ancestors ate from our hands.
Today we scattered seeds on the bare ground 
and watched the bickering birds convening
with one track minds.

We walked back in time
and shared giggles at things we'd fought over -
like the biggest piece of pie and who sat 
next to dad in the car, important things
like George Waldencott.
 
Tears flowed from our eyes
recalling a chipped tooth and broken arm,
burns from cigarettes we'd hid in these woods -
a few of the scars from fights for the rights,
rights of the other. 

Our lunches eaten,
our lemonade thermos emptied too fast,
still hungry for mem'ries of days long past.
She sneaked a cookie from its hiding place 
in her shirt pocket.

She took off running, 
holding it high in the air, looking back
and yelling her dare, "Nana, nana, na - na!"
Racing  t'wards home we climbed the garden wall 
and split the cookie.

And at last she spoke 
words I had ached to hear since their wedding -
"Thank you, Cissy, for letting me have George."
She went home with hubby and three children.
I went home, just me.

6/10/13

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 7/18/2013 10:59:00 PM
REASON, you wrote a lovely summer day's poem.... congrats... SKAT
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Date: 7/15/2013 10:25:00 AM
Nostalgic poem of sisters. Enjoyed the wonderful images of sisters's love. Congrats on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/14/2013 6:04:00 PM
thanks for the mail.... a nice summer day write... congrats... :-)... always & forever.... PD
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Date: 7/13/2013 11:47:00 PM
congrats on your winning entry in the "Summer" contest
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Date: 6/14/2013 12:54:00 AM
'WOW, you gave up a guy to your sister? Is that what this means? This is awesome stuff!!! For some reason I was thinking you were married, Reason? Is this fiction then? I really love it. Tell me what inspired it.
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