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Still Hoping

STILL HOPING

A palatial bath in my tomb
A luxurious pot for my doom
To still aching of body
Fill up with hot toddy
Warm up this cold girl for a groom

10/11/2016

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2016

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October 11, 2016 at 10:02 PM

great one here!

October 11, 2016 at 11:41 PM

Thank you, Casarah!

October 11, 2016 at 3:27 PM

Excellent limerick with great humour Kim:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

October 11, 2016 at 4:54 PM

Thank you, Jan! :)

October 11, 2016 at 2:37 PM

That was fun to read. Very humorous and well written and I liked it! Bravo on this little gem. :)

October 11, 2016 at 3:17 PM

Took me a couple days to come up with something. Thank you so much!

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