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STILL HOPING

STILL HOPING A palatial bath in my tomb A luxurious pot for my doom To still aching of body Fill up with hot toddy Warm up this cold girl for a groom 10/11/2016

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Date: 10/11/2016 10:02:00 PM
great one here!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/11/2016 11:41:00 PM
Thank you, Casarah!
Date: 10/11/2016 3:27:00 PM
Excellent limerick with great humour Kim:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/11/2016 4:54:00 PM
Thank you, Jan! :)
Date: 10/11/2016 2:37:00 PM
That was fun to read. Very humorous and well written and I liked it! Bravo on this little gem. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/11/2016 3:17:00 PM
Took me a couple days to come up with something. Thank you so much!