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Still Holding My Own

a rumbling sound came from the pipes
sounding like playing bagpipes
you have been slaughtered
I have been watered
now looking for new sink types

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Jay Narain

November 1, 2024 at 11:11 AM

You have skill to write a poem on anything. Nice for a win.

Paula Goldsmith

November 4, 2024 at 9:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your very kind words. Glad you enjoyed reading my silly "Still Holding My Own" write. I enjoyed writing this crazy one. Have a fun autumn day writing away.............

Daniel Henry Rodgers

November 1, 2024 at 9:35 AM

Dear Paula, Wow, I hope everyone is alright. Lol! I needed a good smile today and yours was the cure. Good Luck, my friend, with your winner. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Paula Goldsmith

November 1, 2024 at 9:45 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your Good Luck. Glad you enjoyed reading my silly "Still Holding My Own" write. Also glad this gave you a good smile. I love to gave out smiles. Have a fun autumn day writing away.............

Tom Cunningham

November 1, 2024 at 4:02 AM

Sounds like you had a smashing time Paula lol. Good luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend. Tom

Paula Goldsmith

November 1, 2024 at 9:40 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your Good luck in the contest. Glad you enjoyed reading my silly "Still Holding My Own" write. Yes, it was a smashing time. Hahaha!!! Have a fun autumn day writing away.............

Michael Tor

October 31, 2024 at 11:11 PM

Your words really share what that picture shows Dear Paula. Best wishes in the contest...

Paula Goldsmith

November 1, 2024 at 9:37 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your Best wishes in the contest. Glad you enjoyed reading my silly "Still Holding My Own" write. It was so much fun to write... Have a fun autumn day writing away.............

Beryl Edmonds

October 31, 2024 at 8:46 PM

You must have had a cracking time Paula, though smashing the sink is a little crazy, don’t you think… Beryl

Paula Goldsmith

November 1, 2024 at 9:36 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed reading my silly "Still Holding My Own" write. Yes, it was all crazy. Hahaha!!! Have a fun autumn day writing away.............

Karen Jones

October 31, 2024 at 7:35 PM

Paula this is brilliant and practical! I bet you win placement! Good luck! I accidentally misunderstood and wrote a set! lol I’m sure it is grounds for disqualification! Oh well

Paula Goldsmith

November 1, 2024 at 9:12 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your Good luck. Glad you found my silly "Still Holding My Own" write to be brilliant/practical. Maybe you will be OK, just wait/see. Have a fun autumn day writing away............